Please look over the show line up below.
Consider the rubric, score and critique your show - be honest!
Intro - Dollar Bill Skit
Pledge
Spirit Week
Basketball Commercial
Parking Issues
Ask Josh
Haunted Mask
Closing
Please score each area using the following rubric:
1 - poor
2 - fair
3 - good
4 - excellent
Please justify your score with concrete evidence for each feature/segment. Note that you are judging what you see on the show, not conisdering prior knowledge of effort, work, etc. I realize that this is difficult, stretch yourself.
Blogs that do not show thought and truly reflect will be scored accordingly.
8 comments:
Wow, I'm the first post on this week old blog. lol
intro-2
good thought was put into this segment but it didn't really fall through the way it was suppose to.
pledge-4
i dont need much evidence for this
spirt week-3
could have been better if we had used a tri-pod and if people heads didn't get cut off in the shots.
basketball-2
more like dropped ball. i actually had mr.all come up to me and ask why did we not make a commercial out of his footage. this was a good idea that didnt get finished right.
parking-2
i didn't really get anything out of it. i saw a lot of crak hand and a bunch of stuff that had nothing to do with parking
ask josh-4
by far the best part of our whole show. could have been planed a little better but still had lots of laughs
haunted mask-3
was a better in our heads. it was cut short and would have been better if we had more time to air.
closing-4
i like the way we took some photos and made them move.
I can't really remember the show, but I'll try my best.
Intro-3
Pledge-4
Basketball-2
Parking-4
Haunted Mask-4
Closing-4
into - 2
I didn't really like this, I think we could have filmed it better.
pledge - 4
its the pledge, come on now..
spirit week - 3
They didn't import the other tape I found that could have made it so much better.
basketball - 2
it wasn't a commercial.
parking - 4
I thought it was funny. People know what irritates us about the parking now.
ask josh - 4
the actualy clip we used for the show wasn't as good as what we had to cut. But it was funny.
haunted mask - 3
I thought it wasn't going to be good. But apparently people are wanting to see what happens.
closing - 4
I wasn't here that day. And I was quite jealous, because I liked it.
Intro-2
Didn't exactly worked the way we had it planned.
Pledge-3
dude, it was the pledge!
Spirit Week-3
tapes messed up didn't get to add all the days of spirit week.
Basketball Commercial- 2
wasn't really a commercial just a clip. ball dropped.
Parking Issues-4
got the problems out about parking and the people were funny.
Ask Josh-4
Josh's answers were funny and it was a great segment and advertisment.
Haunted Mask-3
good idea, just didn't look the way it was planned out to look.
Closing-4
great idea with still [moving] images, lol. worked out great.
This is mallory.
I think our show was decent, not our best but better then show one.
The class put more time and effort toward this show.
intro 2
was ok if the video would have worked like it was suppose to then I think it would have been a lot better. but for what the school really saw i think the intro was very bad and didnt work as well as intended.
pledge: 3
we need to work on camera areas and filming techniques and no mess up something as simple as the pledge.
Spirit Week 2
was bad.
all the days that formed spirit week were not all in our show.
and the song was very dull and didn fit in with the attitude of spirit week.
BasketBall 4
The commecial was sketchy.
I mean all we did was import wat mr all gave us so it was good for what it was.
Ask josh 3
we did plan a lot for this segment and we came to problems and fixed them, i didn like the inappropriate comments made throughout the segment though, they ended up getting us into trouble i would have rather avoided. other then that was made the best of it,
Haunted mask 4
i think the HHM part one was okay
and i like how lane did the voice over at the begining to simluate "scary places on earth"
and they have good camera angles and i t did have its dull moments such as it being too long in the closet talking.
Closing 4
the action pictures were cool
i really liked it and even though we had two people missing i think we still pulled it off.
that show was rough i thnk but as i said improved a lil from show one.
and we still need a good bit of improving to do .
byes
Intro- 2
This intro did not come out like we had anticipated. It would have been smoother if you were unable to see RAMTV staff in the shot. We were unable to find tapes for this and had a difficult time trying to get this one part going.
Pledge- 4
Don't think I really need to explain this. Sorry to the people who think the pledge needs to be creative...not happening viewers....
Spirit Week- 2
I didn't like this segment. It was too much of a "lets pretend like we are going to take a picture" thing. The music was wayyy to hard to pick out and there were too many seniors.
Basketball- 3
It was not for this season. It was clips of last season. Props to Coach All for the footage. I must add I was not crazy about "Disturbia" being the song after seeing Caleb's video on youttube...lol
Parking Issues- 2
A 2 is being generous on this segment. The profanity that was in it originally was not acceptable. I didn't care for a lot of the footage. If I am not mistaken the word "sucks" was in this and it shouldn't have been. There was also crack hand.
Ask Josh- 2
It was funny in some parts but there were inappropriate things thrown in, even though some of it was edited. The word "sucks" again was thrown in and I do no support being gay but I will admit it probably should no have been thrown in.
Haunted Mask- 3
I enjoyed this segment. It left me wanting to see what happens next. The voice over for the intro to it was great as well.
Closing- 3
I liked the movement in there. I wish I would have been able to do it myself but I was at Special Olympics that day. :(
Lead-ins need to be more professional! There also does not need to be a distracting background!
I still love you guys!
Intro - 1 - I thought that the intro did not really make sense. You couldn't even really tell it was a dollar. Definitely a weak segment.
Pledge - 4 - It's a pledge, not much to say/
Spirit Week - 2 - Not even footage from every day, pretty weak really.
Basketball Commercial- 2 - Terrible commercial with pretty much no informational value.
Parking issues - 4 - HILARIOUS segment with a lot of funny stuff.Also informational.
Ask Josh - 2 - I didn't like the version we cut. The original was much better.
Haunted Mask - 3 - decent, I liked the shots, I thought it was pretty funny.
Closing - 2 - it was funny but didnt really make sense.
Intro-1, sure it was funny and creative, but the film messed up and people really couldnt understand what was going on.
Pledge-4, it's not hard to mess a pledge up.
Spirit Week- 3, a tripod would be better next time instead of holding the camera.
Basketball-2 we really didnt get the message across about the ladies basketball.
Parking-2, it was bad because some of the shots were from a car and somebody used a wirty dord.
Ask Josh-4, this segment was amazing even though it was edited, but it got the point across and was funny.
Haunted Mask-3, there was a lot of hard work put into this, but some things did not turn out right, like the black space.
Closing-4, it was cool how we got the pictures to move and i shot lightning.
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