Short and sweet....
Go grab a critique sheet.
Score each section of the show (without discussion and be honest)
Justify your reasoning for each score.
No score can be given without backing it up with concrete reasons.
(Being "wordy" is not necessary - but make your point!)
Enjoy!
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11 comments:
Opening-3
Feature1-4
Segment1-3
Segment2-4
Segment3-3
Segment4-2
Closing-4
Tech Quality-3
Overall Aesthetics-3
Show Content-4
Word. I got to edit a music video for this show. So of course I gave it a four. Cannot wait until the next show. jeeesusss
Lead in and pledge - 3, its kind of plain but gets the point across and it could be better but it always has room for improvement.
Lazy Highland - 4, this is very unique and should grab all students attention!
HST Idol - 3, kind of plain but does get the point across and leaves no romm for confusion.
What HST had for breakfast - 3, this is cool, could have had more people so we could have a much wider variety of responses.\
Breaking the Law - 4, its just a basic infomercial but it states what is needed to be said.
Ms. Meltons interview - 3, this one wasnt so long and boring like past interviews.
Credits and bloopers - 4, i like our pics at the end but we need a few more quick bloopers
Tech - 3, could be smoother and music fade better
Aesthetics - 3, could use improvement
Content - 3, it was informative but yet still funny and enjoyable.
I think that the pledge was good this week, so I give it a 4. The teachers were a good addition to the segment. That shows we include everyone, even staff. The lead-ins were funny. I just hope everyone gets what we trying to pertray.
Lazy Highland seems to be funny. I give it a 3 though cause at times, it's a little burry. I know that's do to the fact that it was saved as a quicktime, but the rest of the school doesn't know that.
HST Commerical, I give a 4 because it has different races and genders showing that they "can sing" and it shows that Highland people can have fun. It shows that everyone and anyone can be inculded.
Breakfast, I give a 3 because at some times you couldn't even hear what some people was saying, but it did show a great range of our students.
Breaking the Law I give a 4 because it's serious and has a lot of information that can be of value to someone that doesn't want to get introuble driving.
Mrs. Melton I give a 4 because it shows another new staff member. It shows that the new staff member segment continued. I didn't know about her until someone mentioned her.
The closing seems great so I give it a 4 cause it shows that lead-ins aren't as easy as they seem. And it gets a couple laughs.
Technical Quality I give a 3 because of course everything isn't perfect.
Overall Aeshetics I give a 3 because at some parts you weren't able to hear comments form the interviewees.
Show Content I give a 4 because it was fun and enetertaining while informative and stayed on the rules.
Opening-4 This part of the show is usually boring but the lead-ins are funny and it has to be done so I give it a 4.
Feature One-4 Chris Henry GOT 0ff and I hope he gets all fours, so for my critique sheet he's getting a 4!
Segement One-3 I liked this because we used students but some of the footage was long so I give it a 3.
Segment Two-3 I give this a 3 because it had some humor and it also used students instead of Ram Tv Staff.
Segment Three-2 This wasn't really excting to me it just seemed like a interview but it still has potential for future episodes.
Segment Four-2 I liked the interview because Jamie and Ms. Melton make a good team but this too was a little long.
Closing-4 Bloopers are AlWAYs GREAt!
Techniacal Quality-4
Overall Aesthetics-4
Show Content-4
I give the last 3 4s because we WORK HARD!
The Opening I am going to assume is the RAM TV PARTY TIME EXCELLENT part if so I shall give it a 4 cause I like it and I thought of it. It may be a little bias but what can you do. The feature I give a 3 cause I made it and Jake did a fantastic job. I still think I made it suck with my boringness if you will. Segment one I give a 3 cause it was short and sweet but not very neet. lol. We could have but more time in it. Segment 2 the Break Fast thing was a 3 cause it was a filler thing but it was good none the less. Segment 3 The PAY SOUR thing is a 3 cause it was informative but could have been cooler. Segment 4 Mrs. Melton interview was good I give a 4. Jamie did a good job on it and it was not that boring. The closing I like the effect but not the music at all. I hate Jack Johnson!!!!!!. One thing I was thinking is that we have the staff lol at the beginning and the end. Just a thought. Like the bloppers over all a 3.
Technical is a 3 cause some stuff is messed up, such as the rap. The Aesthetics is a wierd word but it was all good, 4. Show overall is a 3 and 2/3 cuz I like to be differnt. JESUSSSSS
Lead in/Pledge-4, I really liked the Waynes World lead ins and I also liked the pledge.
Lazy Highland-4, I loved this one because its different. I haven't ever seen anything like it at highland. i was very surprised when I watched it because to be honest when me and chelsea were listening to them make it we thought it didn't sound to well. but it turned out GREAT and I am very impressed!
HST idol commercial-3, I think that it could've been better and more attention grabbing(and I was in it lol).
What HST had for breakfast-3, I liked this is was ok I just think that we could've gotten something better.
Officer Paysour-3, i think this was good but it was also a little on the boring side just because it was so long. Also I was expecting an actual commercial from them, like them getting arrested and then him talking but that didn't happen. So I it just wasn't what I was expecting.
Closing/Bloopers-4, I liked the bloopers and the closing pictures i think that it is great. Nothing more for me to say lol.
Tech. Quality-4, I think that Chelsea did a great job at editing. If I would've been able to help her more than just the last day I probably could've helped her more or noticed some more stuff.
Overall-3, I think that Jamie could've spoken up a little bit more because it was hard to hear her sometimes during the interview. And I already said what I wanted to about the editing about the show.
Show Content-4, i think its a really good show. It's not as good as the first show but its pretty high up there!
Comments- The only comment that I have is about the time that i was able to edit the show, which was one day. Most of the time Chelsea was editing alone because there was someone else either at the computer or they were in the other seat beside her. i understand that some people like to edit but when it's someone else's turn to edit that person needs to kinda back off and let them edit. And if we ask for help then help us, but that dosen't mean take over our job that just means explain to us where to go and what to do. So i give Kudos to Chelsea because she basically edited this whole show by herself I didn't do anything at all except for the closing pictures because I wasn't given the chance to.
Opening-4
Feature1-4
Segment1-4
Segment2-4
Segment3-4
Closing-4
Tech Quality-3
Overall Aesthetics-3
Show Content-4
I gave everything a 4 because i think it was very good content. I think that everything got the point across it was meant to make. I gave the 3's because i dint think that everything is perfect because we all amake mistakes.
Lead ins/pledge - 3. Wayne's World was funny and the pledge was alright.
Lazy Highland - 4. Chris was awesome, like he always is, and Jake edited like a genius, like he always does. Those two pulled it off!
HST idol - 4. Jenny's commercial was great and professional. It grabbed everyone's attention. Some dead time during Cameron's singing.
What HST had for breakfast - 3. It was good to be a "filler" but it could have been put together better. Also, I think we should've asked some other questions too.
Breaking the Law - 4. It was done well, gave basic information and was informative. Lead-in for this was good and memorable.
Ms. Melton's Interview - 3. I still think it was too long, but overall better than the previous one.
Credits and bloopers - 3. Our pictures at the end were good but maybe a few more bloopers.
Tech - 3. There were still some editing problems (transitions, sound).
Aesthetics - 3. Some parts hard to hear.
Content - 3. It got the point across and was informative, yet entertaining.
Wish we could've had an awesome show, but still great!
SHow two was funny, and good, and had alot of meat, and not as much fluff.
Opening- 2, because the pledge is boring and needs a cool way of doing it.
Feature 1-4, it was christ henrys rap and was funny, and should keep the students watchign and laughing.
Feature 2- 3, this is the Idol, it king od plain, and boring, it needs to be kiced up alittle, but does it the point across.
Feature 3- 2, this is what you had for breakfeast, i think this was stupid, it had no meaing, and i dont think most students care what people ate.
Feature 4- 3, the is offiecer passyour talkign about the laws, this was good, becuase it need to be sad before people got tickets.
Closing- 4, i thoguht hwo the music and the transiton went togehter was cool. it was an unigue idea.
Tech- 3, music could habe been better and the transition, and sound could have been clearer?
Aesthetics - 3, could use improvement
Show contnet- 4, we haf alot of content, we had alot of meat, and not alot of fluff so that was good.
Opening-3
Feature1-3
Segment1-3
Segment2-3
Segment3-3
Closing-4
Tech Quality-3
Overall Aesthetics-3
Show Content-3
I wasn't really amazed by this show, however I thought it was well edited and I think were keeping up the pace with good shows, I just wish we would see different people. I know its only show to but I am seeing the same people over and over again in things. Also I haven't seen Jake, Scott, or Leah really on camera.
Opening-4
Feature-3
Segment1-3
Segment2-4
Segment3-3
Segment4-3
Closing-4
Tech Quality-3
Overall Aesthetics-3
Show Content-4
I think it all went over well and every one seem to really like chrises rap
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